Have you automated a manual process that has saved your team or yourself multiple hours per week? Do you have an idea for a new project that would improve cost savings for your team? Do you like free lunches? If yes, then I can show you a place where you can share your ideas, gain recognition for your efforts, and earn a free lunch ticket.
I would like to introduce MMy Ideas, MassMutual's new platform for employees to submit and/or view ideas for improvements or projects in your department. Each employee will be able to enter in their ideas into the MMy Ideas webpage where they will be stored and tracked by department. We welcome any idea, big or small. It doesn’t matter whether it has only helped you save a few minutes a day or has helped your team save hours per week. As long as it has improved your workday in any way, we want to hear about it.
So please log onto our MMy Ideas website and start inputting your ideas and earn a free lunch ticket on us for your efforts. The more people who share their ideas, the more we can spread the word and help others save some time and effort in their workday. Think. Submit. Implement. That’s MMy Ideas.
I really enjoyed the way you wrote your memo. It delivered the message in a simple way and spoke to the reader's emotions - wanting to be recognized and gain recognition. Your closing, "Think. Submit. Implement. That's MMy Ideas." would also likely stick with the audience. It conveys the message in a simple and concrete manner.
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ReplyDeleteThis message was simple and concrete. Your opening questions intrigued me and I wanted to learn more about how I could get a free lunch!
ReplyDeleteI also liked the ending sentence using the three simple that made woud make the message stick in people's minds!
Kellie, I really enjoyed this memo. I think the title "Think. Submit. Implement." is very simple and will stick with the reader. I especially liked how you tied it back into the last sentence of the memo.
ReplyDeleteThe questions in the opening paragraph also really get the reader's attention and gets them thinking.
Of course offering free lunch tickets makes it that much more sticky too! :)
Good article, Kellie. The "free lunch" offer sneaked up on me and got my attention. Good work laying out the basic call to action.
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